HomeHome  PortalPortal  CalendarCalendar  GalleryGallery  FAQFAQ  SearchSearch  MemberlistMemberlist  UsergroupsUsergroups  RegisterRegister  Log inLog in  

Share | 
 

 GALLERIA (artwork)

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
Go to page : 1, 2  Next
AuthorMessage
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: GALLERIA (artwork)   Thu Jan 13, 2011 3:54 am

going to get my sketchpad back tomorrow, in the meantime just did this for hwk on perspective, helps alot with drawing accurately
sorry for shitty cell phone camera
















Last edited by Katylin on Thu Jan 20, 2011 4:21 am; edited 2 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
shigetsu

avatar

Posts : 902
Points : 1103
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 25
Location : BC, Vancouver

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Shig
health:
-1/0  (-1/0)
Choice!: Designs of the future

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Thu Jan 13, 2011 6:58 am

no scan?

that bed looks more comfortable than mine
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://shig3tsu.blogspot.ca/
Sai

avatar

Posts : 233
Points : 245
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 24
Location : Behind your window.

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Sai kun
health:
1337/1337  (1337/1337)
Choice!: Future Mangaka

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Thu Jan 13, 2011 3:19 pm

Ara ara~~ <8O
So life-like and welldrawn, the 3D perspective is excellent, really like the criss-cross pattern of the shading on the matress too~~ and it's better than mine... hmm (tohohoho~~)
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://ss3-sai.deviantart.com
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Thu Jan 13, 2011 4:23 pm

Sai wrote:
Ara ara~~ <8O
So life-like and welldrawn, the 3D perspective is excellent, really like the criss-cross pattern of the shading on the matress too~~ and it's better than mine... hmm (tohohoho~~)

haha ty, i only just learned the techniques recently. i think u said u just started drawing and never took lessons right? im pretty much the same but im finally learning the basics

its drawn in two point perspective and the shading is cross hatching, u should look it up. it helps alot
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Asa
Admin
avatar

Posts : 1087
Points : 1381
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27
Location : California

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Okami
health:
9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807  (9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807)
Choice!: Yui

PostSubject: Galleria   Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:25 pm

That's pretty good. I'm not really good with perspective and stuff and reality so I always call my stuff abstract haha >.>

Anyway Davis is like notorious for flu and I've had one for a week, it's pretty crappy.

Planning on going up to Tahoe today, which I tried to get out of but can't now Sad.

Show me if you do portraits, we had to do portraits in the one art class I did, people have never been uglier gjjj
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://sosbrigade.forumotion.net
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:09 pm

Asa wrote:
That's pretty good. I'm not really good with perspective and stuff and reality so I always call my stuff abstract haha >.>

Anyway Davis is like notorious for flu and I've had one for a week, it's pretty crappy.

Planning on going up to Tahoe today, which I tried to get out of but can't now Sad.

Show me if you do portraits, we had to do portraits in the one art class I did, people have never been uglier gjjj

portraits are on the final week i think, still doing objects

and i think alot of portraits will be bad since this is a starting class, u cant really do a good portrait without a good understanding of the skull anatomy
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Asa
Admin
avatar

Posts : 1087
Points : 1381
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27
Location : California

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Okami
health:
9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807  (9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807)
Choice!: Yui

PostSubject: artwork   Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:46 am

I remember whenever I was drawing portraits I would always feel like the measurements were really off,
like too much brain or something - but after you fill in all the other stuff it's like - I guess that's right.

Anyway I thought sketching was fun but I gave up Sad. I just like throwing paint at the wall and stuff.

Back to top Go down
View user profile http://sosbrigade.forumotion.net
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:36 am

sorry i havent put up anything new, i have the pages too but im soooo lazy to upload them
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Asa
Admin
avatar

Posts : 1087
Points : 1381
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27
Location : California

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Okami
health:
9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807  (9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807)
Choice!: Yui

PostSubject: galleria   Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:54 pm

whenever you're bored then. I know how it is, uploading is like such a nuisance that's why I iphone all my stuff now >.>

My scanner hasn't worked on any of the printers I got for some reason, which leads me to suddenly realize just now it might be me and not the printers.

But I always just took pictures on my camera and uploaded which is a ordeal in itself >.>
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://sosbrigade.forumotion.net
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Thu Jan 20, 2011 4:16 am

updated, added more to my first post

some are incomplete but.. given the timeframe its what i came up with, too lazy to finish them too

criticism is welcome btw, cant improve unless u take a verbal beating like a man

our class has critiques but we're not allowed to say anything negative, so pointless
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sai

avatar

Posts : 233
Points : 245
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 24
Location : Behind your window.

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Sai kun
health:
1337/1337  (1337/1337)
Choice!: Future Mangaka

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Thu Jan 20, 2011 4:02 pm

Gotta love those perspective-based bg works. Nuffin wrong there~~
I don't see anything that I could tell you to add, they're works that demand a good grade, no doubt. Guess my brain is so broken that it can't come up with anything "bad" to say to anything or anyone, I could consult my art teachers for you if you want~ <8P
Mmm... that leafy background looks so tasty as a backdrop for some manga panels, I'd almost steal it~~ gjjj

Good critizism has to be realistic, and it is often "negative" to some, because hearing it is uncomfortable. Good critizism should be permitted, such as taking into account the technique employed, the texture, and overrall quality. The topic that the piece of art plays a role too, but it varies. Bitchin' about the topic is the REAL negative thing that you should avoid.
Bad critizism is that negative that you might be talking about.
Bad ones are like the one I just mentioned, bitchin about it cuz ya don't like it. Sometimes I get comments that my doujin's characters are too slim, or too muscular, too tall, etc. Those are their personal preferences, and have nothing to do with the work itself, ofcourse there are standards about how things should be that it is acceptable. In my case, it has to appeal to people atleast moderately. Drawing a fine line between preferences and standards are vital as an artist, both to yourself and to others.

If you can, solve out what kind of critizism your class permits~~ However, it it's just happy go lucky class that just wants to have fun instead of doing some real work, save them, unless they ask for it.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://ss3-sai.deviantart.com
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Thu Jan 20, 2011 4:37 pm

thanks for the feedback sai, and yea i feel ya on the criticism part. when i meant negative criticism though, its more of like errors in technique or lack of that can be used to improve on a piece

opinions are always worth hearing, good or bad its just an opinion, its just how you want to interpret it i suppose

i pretty much say the same thing about everyones work, vague positive things with words that sound fancy Smile (unless they really do a good job, im a tough critic to please)
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sai

avatar

Posts : 233
Points : 245
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 24
Location : Behind your window.

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Sai kun
health:
1337/1337  (1337/1337)
Choice!: Future Mangaka

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Thu Jan 20, 2011 5:08 pm

Well, then it's something you should help them with then, the question is, will they accept it? Just use the "nice-guy" approach, like pointing out flaws but in a friendly way, such as
"I think you could do something about this one, I think the lines are a bit thin over here, it's my own opinion however, don't take it too seriously"
^- The It's-just-my-opinion is a technique to ease people, psychological, just makes it more acceptive for people to listen to, don't forget that your face plays a value too, a stern face is a boot to the head and a big minus to people's mood receivers. Try it out, they might even give a smile back, a smile a day brightens the day, right? Just make sure the conditions are right~ (Such as not having an image of a troll/jerk) <8P

The trick is to put yourself to a "henchman"-level, and be supportive and self-downplaying, don't forget the face. Hmm... perhaps I'm not that innocent after all? Fufufu~~ drunk
If the teachers don't allow critizism that is vital to some, then they are doin' it wrong~ be sneaky and employ psychological warfare (Nice-guy-tactic)

I didn't make it this far without help yaknow, I never picked up the ink pen in fear of causing irreversible mistakes, I never picked up the dot-patterns of real mangas alone either, and neither did I start this whole dream alone either~~ Aaand, I just learnt how to use the two point-perspective (Kahden pakopisteen perspektiivi) thanks to you, give yourself a pat on the back, you've earned it ~~ gjjj
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://ss3-sai.deviantart.com
Asa
Admin
avatar

Posts : 1087
Points : 1381
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27
Location : California

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Okami
health:
9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807  (9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807)
Choice!: Yui

PostSubject: galleria   Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:48 pm

wow it's pretty nice. I mean pretty nice as in, I could not draw like that if I tried ... really hard ha.

I especially like the sort of flower branches, tree branch one, I'm guessing that's what it is.
Is that sketched? It reminds me of the paper cutting art, either way it's pretty awesome.

rainbow

I'm writing briefly because I have to hunt down coffee before they all close down and leave me caffeine deprived Sad.

I want to see a portrait whenever you end up doing one. I like to see how people draw other people ha.

Anyway, other people should post interesting stuff they do, it always brightens my day to see stuff on the forums ha.

Anyway on that note, well not really I went into class today to do this short close-reading essay in Science Fiction, and so I went in, looked at the passage wrote, wrote, wrote - little
did I know it was worth 20% of my grade! Two pieces of innocent paper released from my hand to my teacher and he even smiled as if he knew that I had no idea I had just handed in 1/5
of my grade >.> I thought it was like a practice paper, because in other classes we do daily 1-2 page essays just for FUN! well they aren't fun, but that's the teacher's take, they're like worth 1% >.>
Anyway sigh.
Going to go to my late 8pm discussion then back home to ... Sad
Oh wait, I don't eat after 8pm so I'll go back and starve :'(.

I started watching this drama, erika toda, taisetsu something something. Ha that's my google mind working, only need 1-2 pieces of information and google will find it for me so I never
know the whole title's of anything anymore. I don't know since I watched it raw and during all the good parts where people look into each others' eyes the japanese suddenly gets really
difficult and slangish and I'm like WTH, so maybe I'll have to rewatch when it's subbed. But it basically just uses all of Pink's songs for the entire episode ha, which I love ha.

coffee >.> I forgot, must go.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://sosbrigade.forumotion.net
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:47 am

Sai wrote:

I didn't make it this far without help yaknow, I never picked up the ink pen in fear of causing irreversible mistakes, I never picked up the dot-patterns of real mangas alone either, and neither did I start this whole dream alone either~~ Aaand, I just learnt how to use the two point-perspective (Kahden pakopisteen perspektiivi) thanks to you, give yourself a pat on the back, you've earned it ~~ gjjj

heres some more perspective as thanks



Asa wrote:
I want to see a portrait whenever you end up doing one. I like to see how people draw other people ha.

started on portraits today, drew this dude and a woman from some paper copy handout, the woman didnt come out too well but i didnt have much time; still good practice though, i have never drawn faces before
homework is self portrait; i'll post my sexy face too once i finish it




Asa wrote:
I especially like the sort of flower branches, tree branch one, I'm guessing that's what it is.
Is that sketched? It reminds me of the paper cutting art, either way it's pretty awesome.

yea its a tree branch, its a negative space drawing. i basically cut out everything that had a shape or form and filled in the background so all that black is whats behind the branch

Back to top Go down
View user profile
Asa
Admin
avatar

Posts : 1087
Points : 1381
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27
Location : California

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Okami
health:
9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807  (9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807)
Choice!: Yui

PostSubject: galleria   Fri Jan 21, 2011 2:39 am

how long does a sketch, like the woman take you? I really like her picture.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://sosbrigade.forumotion.net
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Fri Jan 21, 2011 3:00 am

that took like 30 mins at most, was done in my sketchpad so the size is really small
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Fri Jan 21, 2011 4:33 am

woohoo i just got a hand down printer/scanner/copier

u can see that the eyes look strange, the right eye is a little too high, but only slightly

Back to top Go down
View user profile
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Fri Jan 21, 2011 4:41 am

while i test my scanner heres what my professor thinks

Back to top Go down
View user profile
shigetsu

avatar

Posts : 902
Points : 1103
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 25
Location : BC, Vancouver

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Shig
health:
-1/0  (-1/0)
Choice!: Designs of the future

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Fri Jan 21, 2011 9:14 am

so which ones the woman
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://shig3tsu.blogspot.ca/
Sai

avatar

Posts : 233
Points : 245
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 24
Location : Behind your window.

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Sai kun
health:
1337/1337  (1337/1337)
Choice!: Future Mangaka

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Fri Jan 21, 2011 6:01 pm

@Steve~ Clearly worth an A(s), nuff said~ Don't mind if I do! *yoinks*

@shig~ I lol'd
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://ss3-sai.deviantart.com
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Fri Jan 21, 2011 9:55 pm

shigetsu wrote:
so which ones the woman

it should still be obvious but yea, page was too small couldnt fit everything and i couldnt draw her face too well cause the printout was kinda shit

drawing faces is so damn difficult
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Asa
Admin
avatar

Posts : 1087
Points : 1381
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27
Location : California

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Okami
health:
9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807  (9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807)
Choice!: Yui

PostSubject: drawing faces   Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:09 pm

Katylin wrote:
shigetsu wrote:
so which ones the woman

it should still be obvious but yea, page was too small couldnt fit everything and i couldnt draw her face too well cause the printout was kinda shit

drawing faces is so damn difficult

Are you trying to go for realism? I sort of like the ... feel it has.

the dot dot dots are my lack of art history references.

Went to bestbuy to get a new keyboard, everything is so expensive there >.>
I got this ergonomic microsoft one so I'm like reteaching myself how to type.

I keep missing the period and typing a comma.

Anyway, I need to hang out at barnes and nobles more often because I am so behind on skip beat manga since the onemanga site closed down >.>
torrenting and stuff is just way too difficult for me with the manga stuff on tokyotosho
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://sosbrigade.forumotion.net
Katylin



Posts : 384
Points : 502
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : 1
health:
100/1  (100/1)
Choice!: Pirate Arrrg

PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   Sun Jan 23, 2011 11:30 pm

here it is, self portrait, i think it looks kinda of weird unless u look directly straight at it, any sort of angle makes it weird but oh well



gonna fix it up and post a more polished version in a bit

here's v2

Back to top Go down
View user profile
Asa
Admin
avatar

Posts : 1087
Points : 1381
Join date : 2009-07-29
Age : 27
Location : California

Roleplay Game
Onsen Trip!! : Okami
health:
9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807  (9223372036854775807/9223372036854775807)
Choice!: Yui

PostSubject: galleria   Fri Jan 28, 2011 3:32 am

ah the school campus is so foggy I was there from 9am till 8pm and the fog never went away. >.>

So I had to watch Avatar for my Science Fiction class and it wasn't as bad as some people had told me. though the military stuff was significantly less fun than the Pandora parts.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://sosbrigade.forumotion.net
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: GALLERIA (artwork)   

Back to top Go down
 
GALLERIA (artwork)
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 2Go to page : 1, 2  Next
 Similar topics
-
» Masquerade's Artwork????
» MediEvil Artwork. My Take on Sir Daniel.
» Artwork
» 10 Crossover Artwork Requests
» Prisoner Exchange 2010: striking scorpion exarch by lord grey wolf

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
 :: SOSBrigade Post your Love~ :: Okaerinasai Goshujinsama-
Jump to: